Logan curled his hand into a fist and aimed for the front of his nose. His fist hit the bridge of Edwards nose. Edward's blood splattered all over the gentle, wavy, green grass! Logan hit him again and Edward tasted his own blood. Edward grabbed his head and pulled him down to the ground. Logan slammed his hand into Edwards ribs. The pain rippled across his chest. But Edward pushed through the pain even when it felt as if his ribs were bruised. Edward struck his hand to slap him in the face and he didn't miss so he luckily won.
But suddenly Logan stood up and said that he hadn't won yet..
So the battle carried on. They both picked up swords and held them in the air up high. The swords clanged together as the battle roared on..
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I love the opening, because Logan and Edward are the main characters in one of my book series and this scene could really have happened between them :D I like how the chapter starts with the action and you get a very good impression of the fighting sequence. The pace is fast, the writing good- super
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