lyra-auburns Lyra Auburns

Heh. Just an apology note. Well, poem. Wrote this at 11:00 at night, after being completely sleep deprived for the whole day. Read at your own risk.


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Sorry

I'm sorry...

I'm sorry I didn't stay strong

I'm sorry I let them get to me

Their promises felt so faithful

Oh, why didn't I listen to you?

Now I'm here, all alone

I wanted to fit in, to be popular

Now I'm lonelier than ever

I'm sorry for losing myself

I'm sorry for changing the way I act and think

I let them change me, I realize now

But, back then,

I thought I was finally figuring it all out

Now I know what they were trying to do

I'm truly sorry for not listening to you

But I promise I'll try harder from now on

What they told me made me feel so special

I felt so good about me for once

But I lost your trust

I can't stop replaying in my mind what you said to me

About not knowing me anymore

I promise I'm still me

I just need some time to unlearn what they said to me

I promise I'm still me

I'm sorry for not talking to you sooner

I'm just realizing how much it would've helped

I guess it was part of their plan

To make me mistrust everyone around me

I'm sorry for making you feel so bad

I'm sorry I let them break me

I'm sorry if these apologies feel empty

But I honestly don't know what to do

I'm sorry for everything I did

I just felt so lost...

But, I promise I'll make it up to you

I promise I'll trust you more

I promise I won't listen to their empty promises anymore

I promise I'll stay strong next time

But please forgive me

Without you, I'm nothing

Without your trust, I don't know what I'll do

I can't handle everything right now

I need you to forgive me

I need you in my life

I'm truly sorry

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Lyra Auburns I'm just a girl trying to share her thoughts with the world. Please don't hesitate to provide criticism of my writing! Thank you to all of my followers for reading my insanity <3

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I find this poem to be quite relatable. Sleep deprived or not, this poem is amazing. Thank you for making a lovely masterpiece of emotions. While I love long poems, I would suggest shortening it just a tiny bit and using more, uh, expressive words? If that makes sense. Though either way, this poem is lovely. So thank you. Have a lovely day, friend. 🦋 ~NI 🌟
March 22, 2023, 18:40

  • Lyra Auburns Lyra Auburns
    "Masterpiece"??? Wow, thank you!!! And I'll definitely try to get around to editing this poem, so thank you for the tips! <3 March 22, 2023, 19:37
Megan T Megan T
I love your stories, they are detailed and entertaining. Please make more ^w^
March 21, 2023, 12:54

Olivia Grace Olivia Grace
This is really good! It's better than the poems I write at daytime 😂 anyways I hope many people get to read it (:
March 18, 2023, 17:43

IC Indrani Choudhary
It's so sensual but I think as a reader that u can make this poem a bit shorter instead you can add a lot of emotions in one line. Otherwise the thought process and everything is just great.
March 05, 2023, 17:52

TH Terry rose Hoeschens
Hi.. im terryrose i really like this , i also share this with my friends and they said that this is really good😊
February 28, 2023, 09:10

  • Lyra Auburns Lyra Auburns
    Aw, thank you, Terryrose! Your words just made my day :) February 28, 2023, 14:17
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