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Landon Winters is an assassin, but when he gets hired as a bodyguard, his world flips out of control, can he manage to … $2.0

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B. Marchand B. Marchand
Updated intro, is that what your looking for?
February 14, 2024, 06:48

  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    I'm looking for help on all fronts, I mean, I can write a chapter, but I can't make many great, I'll get an Idea for one book and go to work on it, and then I'll get one for a different book while I'm working, so I'm looking for help meeting deadlines and making things interesting February 14, 2024, 11:34
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    give it another try, see if you can edit now. February 15, 2024, 04:29
  • B. Marchand B. Marchand
    I can February 15, 2024, 06:38
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    so I guess just take a look at the chapters and tell me what you think needs fixing, and we'll come up with ideas, I think we should rewrite the story, as half of it doesn't make sense. February 15, 2024, 07:11
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    I read your ideas, one problem, Auchia doesn't make any appearances, also, I find it funny that you just gave some ideas and left February 16, 2024, 19:01
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    also, are you still willing to co author Where We're At if I buy the co author thing? February 16, 2024, 19:07
B. Marchand B. Marchand
https://getinkspired.com/register/?ref=B.562934649
February 14, 2024, 05:37

B. Marchand B. Marchand
Okay I do want to push again on I really don’t think you want my help moving the plot, I can give you ideas for days multiple choice and I can do major enhancing and detailing as well as introduce emotional impact to scenes, but… How do I put this, you write John wick, underworld, action based…. I write Hannibal lecter, game of thrones, shameless based… To get to point a and b for you is a snap scenes hold less weight, mine is boring af but 1 scene out of maybe 3 a book you’ll never forget know what I mean? Your way incorporates constant flow and story telling mine is slow tense building heavy scene emotional aftermath.
February 14, 2024, 05:35

  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    That's why I'm talking to you, I don't know how to put detail into chapters, I can barely write a few hundred words, I need someone who can draw out a scene. February 14, 2024, 05:37
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    That's why I'm talking to you, I don't know how to put detail into chapters, I can barely write a few hundred words, I need someone who can draw out a scene. February 14, 2024, 05:37
  • B. Marchand B. Marchand
    Right on and you said something earlier about continuing the plot I was like ehhh February 14, 2024, 05:46
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    When I said continuing the plot, I meant making it more detailed. February 14, 2024, 05:49
  • B. Marchand B. Marchand
    Okay for instance I can buff up your opening scene February 14, 2024, 05:52
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    and I guess since you're a co author, just read all of Shadowtorn a few times, and see what you can do with the draft, oh, and funny thing, I was watching John Wick 2 when I read that first one February 14, 2024, 05:53
  • B. Marchand B. Marchand
    But even though it shows me co author I can’t do anythIng…. Like the chapters are locked etc February 14, 2024, 05:54
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    honestly, I think all of Shadowtorn needs more detail, it's basically the andy griffith show, all talk. February 14, 2024, 05:54
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    oh, can you mess with the visiting a kingdom chapter? February 14, 2024, 05:55
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    i think it's because I created all the chapters before you were a co-author February 14, 2024, 06:05
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    I'm gonna create a new chapter, write something in it if you can February 14, 2024, 06:08
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    did you try going onto it through My Stories tab? February 14, 2024, 06:25
Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
I need your referral code to add you as a co author, it's in the invite friends section of the side menu
February 14, 2024, 05:25
B. Marchand B. Marchand
So what now
February 13, 2024, 22:49

  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    sorry for not responding earlier, had to do something, I guess we talk about ideas for the next chapter while we wait for some beta reading requests to happen February 14, 2024, 02:22
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    Question, would you be willing to help with shadowtorn also? cause I think it you'd have great ideas for it, I also already have a co-author thing for it, cause my last co author left inkspired and moved to wattpad February 14, 2024, 02:43
  • B. Marchand B. Marchand
    Yes I will February 14, 2024, 05:17
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    if you ever want me to answer quickly, I'll probably be on every thirty minutes from 9 am to 4 pm eastern February 14, 2024, 05:19
B. Marchand B. Marchand
Werewolves interesting… Which ever one is darker and more adult rated I would be interested in co authoring
February 13, 2024, 19:54

  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    let's see, hmm, I think it would be Where We're At, since it's about a navy seal who deserts because he doesn't want to see his soulmate get hurt, and his soulmate later tracks him down and tries to drag him back so he doesn't get sent to jail, but if you're looking for anything nsfw, I'd say Shadowtorn February 13, 2024, 20:46
  • Eryndor Kyler Eryndor Kyler
    I did something stupid, I haven't purchased the co-author thing for Where We're At, I bought it for Bleeding Gold February 13, 2024, 20:56
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