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After receiving a cursed object, Dante's life is changed... FOREVER!!!.

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The Eye

* Over 1,000 years ago, a war broke out, some people was lucky, and some were not as lucky. One family took a different path, the path of destruction. But one day, a boy who goes by the name "Devil Eyes" suddenly experienced a great big change that will change him, FOREVER!!!. *

"Hey!, Devil Eyes!"

"I told you, don't call me that"

"Sorry, but it's hard not to, your eyes are changing color"

"Look Jeff, just call me Dante"

"Ok, Dante" Jeff said

"Thanks Jeff" Dante said

"Anyway, I've found something weird the other day" Jeff said

"What was it" Dante asked

"This weird eye shaped object. I don't know what it is, so here, take it" Jeff said

— Jeff hands the object to Dante —

"Thanks, I guess" Dante said

"Be careful though, I don't know what will happen, well, I got to go. see you around, Devil Eyes" Jeff said

— Jeff leaves —

"Well, let's see" Dante said

Dante see something that says "LOOK HERE" on the object. He decides to look, but before he could...


Dante turns around

"What's wrong?" Dante asked

"What ever you do, don't look in there"

"You still haven't answered my question" Dante said

"Look kid, if you love your life, don't look in that little hole"

"If you know something, tell me" Dante said

"I got to go, remember, don't look in there, get rid of that thing, it's dangerous"

The guy leaves in a hurry

"That was odd, I wonder why he couldn't tell me what this thing is, it looked like he knew something about it" Dante said

Out of nowhere, another person showed up, telling Dante to not look in the small hole of the object

"If you know something, tell me, if you don't, I'm going to look in it" Dante demanded

"If you do, your life will be changed forever"

"I'll take that chance" Dante said

"It's your life, not mine"

The guy walks away

"Ok, no more interruptions, I'm going to do it, here it go" Dante said

Dante slowly begins to loo into the hole, as he do, he began to see bright flashes, then he saw a bright red background with an eye staring back at him, a few seconds later, the eye began to glow a bright red then changed to black, as soon as that happened, Dante's eyes begin to burn. Dante was in so much pain, he started to cry blood.


"I told you, I said "Don't look", well, now your life is about to change for the worst"

2023년 11월 23일 2:32 오후 3 신고하기 삽입됨 스토리 팔로우하기
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Grimm Rose Grimm Rose
Good start but stop the repetitions change the sentences that comes to often
January 21, 2024, 03:20
Shaun Waller Shaun Waller
I like your storytelling through the character’s conversations.
December 15, 2023, 23:57
Dila Atman Dila Atman
Hi! we can support each other. Give me 30 vote nd i will give u 30 vote
December 12, 2023, 22:59

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