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The speaker was worried about his lover thinking that he was deceiving her in their relationship. Treating him as a hoax, which was the only drawback of her, he was worried but still he was feeling great about her with how she was concerned about him in his life. He praised her and wanted to reciprocate her by making her know and by letting out his thoughts and feelings by means of this poem...


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A Wonder Of Mine!

A Wonder of Mine!
(Intro)
Her eyes turned erratic beside the darkness!
As a glimmer of hope would wither!
Like a storm turning everything upside down!
Reflecting the disheartened hope beneath her silence!
Her speech turned rambling for ridiculous reasons!
As a glimmer of hope had withered!
Like a storm turning everything upside down!
Reflecting the disheartened hope beneath her silence!
(Chorus)
Yelling in pain, she outwitted me unharmed!
She took me by heart, beyond doubt!
Mumbling in peace, overwhelmed by her innocence!
She took me by soul, beyond mistrust!
(Verse 1)
Her Gleamy Eyes As Elegant As Swan...
A Wonder That Meant To Be Mine!
The complete darkness engulfed and swallowed everything!
Before realizing her unconditional and irreciprocable love!
Tantalizing thoughts and deeds, circumvent all around!
But still, I was just lying empty-minded!
The complete darkness engulfed and swallowed everything!
Just before the glimmer of an idea!
With thoughts dry and bare pervading everywhere!
Wounding and bleeding, as the barren emptiness!
The complete heartbreak engulfed and swallowed everything!
Just before the spark of her love!
Worried thoughts and terrified deeds all around!
Life vowed nothing before her unconditional love!
Well, Maybe, ridiculed by her habitual whining!
A fault of mine, mocking at her!
Yelling in pain and trembling in darkness...
A wonder that meant to be mine!
She hit me with her words, irreciprocable!
Whining like the wind at a keyhole!
She bestowed me, with her unchanging love!
As like a moth to the flame!
Her eyes seemed gleaming, despite the darkness!
As a glimmer of hope would bloom!
After the storm turning everything upside down!
Reflecting the peace within, her exuberant felicity!
A big bug bit a bear buddy!
The buddy broke through his barricade brilliantly!
Burying the bottled-up bounty!
Bloodletting her as bright as a button!
Well, Maybe, moved by her gracious presence!
A fault of mine, mocking at her!
Yelling in pain with the unchanging love...
A wonder that meant to be mine!
Rather me being ignorant, yelling in pain!
Believing me, that I yell in pain!
Rather me being foolish, mumbling in peace!
Believing me, that I mumble in peace!
Stealing my heart in the very second!
Swift as one can, carrying me downstream!
Everything in a fraction of a second!
As a water meadow would flood with!
Believing me, that I mumble in peace!
Disregarding her passion — a fault of mine!
Believing me, that I yell in pain!
Disregarding her pain — a fault of mine!
Well, Maybe, averted with my ruthless attitude!
A fault of mine, intruding on her always!
Yelling in pain with my unforgivable fault...
A wonder that meant to be mine!
Everything splendid, that she endowed on me!
Unaware of deep-cut wounds, I swear — wailing!
Everything grotesque, that she denied to me!
Unaware of well-lit truths, I swear — weeping!
Having blessed me, the severe painful joy!
Ignorant of her pain, mumbling in peace!
Having cursed me, this intense blissful misery!
Ignorant of her generosity, yelling in pain!
With her deep-cut wounds, I was weeping profusely!
Everything went unrecognized, That's my fault rather!
Her self-induced and well-lit truths got spoilt!
Everything went unnoticed, That's my fault rather!
Well, Maybe, convinced of her infuriated anger!
A fault of mine, mocking at her!
Yelling in pain, for that gone unnoticed...
A wonder that meant to be mine!
A Wonder That Meant To Be Mine!
A fault of mine, mocking at her!
Now, yelling in pain, but... well, maybe!
Well, Maybe, I felt her disheartened hope!
Her Gleamy Eyes As Elegant As Swan...
A Wonder That Meant To Be Mine!
(Hook)
A wonder of mine!
(Pre Chorus)
Well, Maybe, I'm startled, questioning her conviction!
A fault of mine, mocking at her!
Yelling in pain and outwitting me unharmed!
A wonder that meant to be mine!
(Chorus)
Yelling in pain, she outwitted me unharmed!
She took me by heart, beyond doubt!
Mumbling in peace, overwhelmed by her innocence!
She took me by soul, beyond mistrust!
(Bridge)
Well, Maybe, ridiculed by her habitual whining!
Well, Maybe, moved by her gracious presence!
Well, Maybe, averted with my ruthless attitude!
Well, Maybe, convinced of her infuriated anger!

Well, Maybe, I felt her disheartened hope!
Well, Maybe, I'm startled, questioning her conviction!
Disregarding her passion — a fault of mine!
Disregarding her pain — a fault of mine!

A fault of mine, mocking at her!

The Most Erratic And The Most Unconquerable...

Her eyes turned erratic beside the darkness!
As a glimmer of hope would wither!
Like a storm turning everything upside down!
Reflecting the disheartened hope beneath her silence!

(Verse 2)
The Most Erratic And The Most Unconquerable...
A Wonder That Meant To Be Mine!

She makes me happy enduring the burdens!
She saddens me by owning those burdens!
She is unaware — she is my world!
Pity, she still believes me a hoax!

Almost everyone could get the doldrums!
A feeling of low spirits lacking energy!
Every once in a while, her foolishness...
Pity, she still believes me a hoax!

Her eyes seemed erratic beside the darkness!
As a glimmer of hope would wither!
Like a storm turning everything upside down!
Reflecting the silence within her disheartened hope!

Her eyes would turn gentle as before!
Let the ray of hope be illuminated!
Like a beacon of light guiding me!
Through the dark ocean, flashing the way!

The Most Erratic And The Most Unconquerable...
A Wonder That Meant To Be Mine!

(Hook)
A wonder of mine!
(Pre Chorus)
Well, Maybe, I'm startled, questioning her conviction!
A fault of mine, mocking at her!
Yelling in pain and outwitting me unharmed!
A wonder that meant to be mine!
(Chorus)
Yelling in pain, she outwitted me unharmed!
She took me by heart, beyond doubt!
Mumbling in peace, overwhelmed by her innocence!
She took me by soul, beyond mistrust!

(Outro)
(Hook)
A wonder of mine!

Fighting The Unconquerable... Still, Might be, I...
A Wonder That Meant To Be Mine!

Yelling and trying to outwit her unharmed!
Trying to make her feel beyond doubt!
Mumbling in excitement, overwhelmed by her innocence!
Trying to make her feel beyond mistrust!

Still, Might be, I would be startled!
Still, Might be, She would be convinced!
Still, Might be, She wouldn't get averted!
Still, Might be, expecting my gracious presence!

Still, Might be, unridiculed by constant whining!
Over time, she wouldn't feel me hoax!
The mystical world running around my legacy!
A wonder of mine - Forever as ever!

Fighting The Unconquerable... Still, Might be, I...
A Wonder That Meant To Be Mine!

(Hook)
A wonder of mine!
(Pre Chorus)
Well, Maybe, I'm startled, questioning her conviction!
A fault of mine, mocking at her!
Yelling in pain and outwitting me unharmed!
A wonder that meant to be mine!
(Chorus)
Yelling in pain, she outwitted me unharmed!
She took me by heart, beyond doubt!
Mumbling in peace, overwhelmed by her innocence!
She took me by soul, beyond mistrust!
(Post Chorus)
Yelling and trying to outwit her unharmed!
Trying to make her feel beyond doubt!
Mumbling in excitement, overwhelmed by her innocence!

Trying to make her feel beyond mistrust!

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Kushal Singh Kushal Singh
This poem is beautifully crafted, with a strong emotional core that resonates deeply. The imagery and language are both vivid and evocative, drawing the reader into the world you've created. Your words flow effortlessly, and the rhythm enhances the overall impact of the piece. You've managed to capture complex feelings in a way that feels both authentic and relatable. Truly a captivating read!
August 10, 2024, 04:10

  • Frenzyee Caroline Frenzyee Caroline
    My deep core thanks for your the comment and also for the review that itself is articulating and unique. August 10, 2024, 04:24
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