richard_hutchinson Richard Hutchinson

A fun educational short story in rhyme form about our solar system for children

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Our Solar System

Our Solar System

In space there's a system we call our home

It's the Solar System, as it's more widely known

It's made up of planets large and small

And each one's it's own orbitting ball

First up is Mercury, closest to the sun

It's small and fast, with views that would stun

Next is Venus with thick, hot air

It's covered in clouds, which makes it quite rare

Earth is third, we're all right here

It has water, life, and an atmoshpere,

Mars is fourth, with a rust-colored hue

It's known for its canyons and mountains, too

Jupiter's fifth, the largest of all

It's got many moons though some are quite small,

Saturn's sixth, with its famous rings

It's truly a sight to see them gleam

Uranus is seventh, with a tilt so strange

With ice-covered moons and diamond rains,

Neptune's eighth and the furthest one out

With the strongest winds in the system, no doubt

That's our solar system in all its glory,

Each planet's unique, and has it's own story

Remember their names, and you'll surely know

The planets around our spherical home.

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Ann E. Jacobites Ann E. Jacobites
Super cute! I wish you would've added Pluto and the poor little guy not being a planet anymore, but he used to be lol RIP Pluto
November 21, 2023, 02:15

  • Richard Hutchinson Richard Hutchinson
    Thank you for your comment! As busy as I've been, I haven't been able to update my book in quite some time. But I did just start working on Uranus, then I'll do Neptune (and may include dwarf planets at the end, including Pluto) let me know if there's anything else you were hoping to seeing here! November 27, 2023, 19:49
  • Les-beam 🏳️‍🌈 Les-beam 🏳️‍🌈
    Yea! And the sun December 10, 2023, 21:07
  • Richard Hutchinson Richard Hutchinson
    Les-Beam: I could probably work the sun in just before the planets begin, not a bad idea December 14, 2023, 18:35