Merci pour la lecture!
The Punctuation/grammar wasn't great, it had quite a lot of errors. The chapter names isnt good in my opinion, because at the last chapter it has to spoil the ending by namin the end chapter "Death" which spoils the end. Pretty decent descripive language, it was pretty gripping and pretty scary. However, I was a bit confused where the character was at the start. Sure in a roller coaster, but is it indoors or outdoors? There could be more descriptive language, but good job!
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