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You definitely want to give this a read. This short story goes through the atypical day of a typical teen as he makes his way through summer school. I’d love any comments or critiques, or even feedback on whether you think this story is worth expanding on. (Only one chapter right now.)

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September 19, 2021, 09:54 2 Promoción
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Valerie Trix Valerie Trix Hey Talmadge, If you want, I'd love to give you some feedback on your story!
September 28, 2021, 22:03

  • Talmadge Morath Talmadge Morath
    Yes please! I would greatly appreciate any honest feedback from fellow readers. I do realize it is quite short, but I would hate to continue something no ones interested in. September 29, 2021, 00:32