evaoduro Eva Oduro

About a student, being so proud of herself, but later lost.

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Proud Batty

There was a girl named Batty. She was a brilliant student in her school, and just because of that she bullies other students and frauds them by telling them to pay a huge amount, without even teaching them.

Batty, was never punished for her attitude because they all feared reporting her. Almost to their mid-semester exams, a new student from another school joined, her name goes Angie. Angie was the same age as Batty.

A few days they held up the mid-semester exam — after the exams, Angie was called out being the overall best student of the mid-semester Exam. Batty finds that insulting, after the announcement about Angie being the best student, Batty asked Angie to meet her in the basement, and with her being kind-hearted and clear-minded she followed Batty. Batty then beats Angie to pulps, which caused Angie to stay in the hospital. Batty did that just to keep her position as the best student.

A few weeks passed, with Angie still at the hospital. Four days into their end-of-semester exam, Angie contacted her class teacher and said she wants to partake in the end-of-semester exams, the teacher said a lot about her condition and she wasn't even in class so how can she write the exams? Angie, 'smirks' and said a mate of mine has been helping me catch up with what has been taught in school, even tho it wasn't like a teacher teaching, at least I didn't miss what was taught in school, the teacher hangs up. A day before the exams the teacher called and said the doctor says she can't go home yet making it the case that you need to write the exam at the hospital, Angie agreed.

After the exams, the students were called for the announcement of—the best student, Batty being so full of herself, she counted herself to be the best student, and to her amazement, Angie won the best student.



(1). Never be So confident about yourself and be humble.

(2). Never envy or be jealous of someone, but rather work to beat the person or ask the person how he or she did it.

May 27, 2022, 3:27 p.m. 7 Report Embed Follow story
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Eva Oduro I'm Eva Oduro from Ghana. 19years old.. I always loved writing either by inspiration or imagination. I live in different dimensions through writing. I'M A STAY❤️

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Jÿb Khîd-Ãrt Jÿb Khîd-Ãrt
Perfect 🤩
July 08, 2022, 04:21
Sam Samuel Sam Samuel
Excellent keep it up
May 27, 2022, 18:04