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DBWhat a way to start a story! LOL! :D I'm thinking is this going to be an erotic story, or is the author talking about breast feeding? No telling with Ashley, but I assumed the latter. I'm glad to see that Ashley hasn't lost her knack for great descriptive story telling.
DBIt's definitely getting a little erotic, though I doubt there will be any glistening shaft, twitching tool, or roast beef flaps references ahead. There seems to be some tension and unease building up to something sinister maybe.
DBWell this is weird, tense and mysterious, what is this Dick up to? I'm getting really curious. Is this some kind of human trafficker? Let's read on.
DBVery descriptive scene! It's like one of those action thriller movies and Ashley puts you right in the middle of it like the proverbial fly on the wall. If the whole book is like this it will be a read through to the end!
DBI love the continuous nature of the the story progression. So far no trips off into the weeds with pages of dialogue that have nothing much to do with the story. This is the main thing that made me a quick fan of this author. Ashley stays on target without useless filler that has you flipping ahead.
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