"Ok ok that's enough kids, now it's time to go to bed and don't forget to brush your teeth," said Sunna's mother to Sunna's friends.
"Okay, who's finished first," all three girls shouted in the bathroom door
The next day, Sunnah was the first to get up and get ready for school.
Suddenly she hears a hissing noise and strange noises.
She followed the noise in the quietest way possible.
But at that moment the noise stops and she comes to a bolted door.
Her mother kept warning her that she was
not allowed to enter this door.
But her curiosity couldn't stand it and she tried to open the door.
But to no avail the door was double-locked with a chain lock.
At that moment she hears a hot voice.
Inside, she hears someone say her name.
You kept repeating it all the time.
Suddenly she had a headache and the mark on her face began to glow.
And suddenly ...
Her clothes were different, she turned blue and her hair was tied in a ponytail.
The mark on her face got lighter and lighter until she had turned into a Yuna.
A Yuna is a peace hunter also known as the Monster Hunters.
But where there is peace, there is also darkness.
A huan are people who die avoid peace and rule the darkness.
But now back to Sunna.
Once the time is blue again
Color make hat.
They all came running to Sunna and told her what was going on.
But it was too late....
Thank you for reading!
This chapter is ok… I’m not trying to be rude at all! I think your really creative and I can tell just by this chapter! The only thing is I couldn’t understand the chapter. It was very confusing on what was going on in my opinion and it didn’t give me much of a hook to want to keep reading… I wish the whole chapter made more sense. That’s just my opinion! Others may think it’s great! Keep Writing!
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