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This chapter is ok… I’m not trying to be rude at all! I think your really creative and I can tell just by this chapter! The only thing is I couldn’t understand the chapter. It was very confusing on what was going on in my opinion and it didn’t give me much of a hook to want to keep reading… I wish the whole chapter made more sense. That’s just my opinion! Others may think it’s great! Keep Writing!
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