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Three friends who study old stuff go on a risky journey to find the famous Obsidian Eye Compass. This compass is supposed to be super powerful, but with a dark past - anyone who touches it ends up in trouble. As they explore ancient ruins, they find clues that bring them closer to the compass. But there's a catch: there's a curse on it. When one of their friends falls victim to the curse, the others have to confront their own fears and doubts as they race against time to unlock the secrets of The Obsidian Eye Compass before it's too late...


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[SUNNIVA POV]

Sunniva:

Hey!! Are you guys coming to Sarah's party tonight?

It's her birthday bash.

And it's gonna be lit!!!


Alex:

Yeah, definitely!

I heard she got a DJ and everything.


Sunniva:

@Mara, are you coming?

Are you there?

MAARRAAAAAA!!!


Mara:

Heyy! Heyy!

No, guys,

I'm not coming to her party.


Alex:

Are you okay?

Busy with something?


Mara:

Just got a new project from Dr. Hawthorne.

A new artifact, and we have to search for it.

Within 3 months.


Sunniva:

Just 3 months, how can we do that?


Mara:

Who knows?

That's why I've searched a little bit before.


Sunniva:

Can you send the picture?

Maybe we can also help!

After all, we are archaeologist team members.


Alex:

Yeah, guys, can we talk about it later?

We are planning to go to Sarah's birthday party tonight.


Sunniva:

Yeah, we will.

Party first, it's been loooongg!!


Mara:

Send an image.

Oh! Sorry @Alex for sending it.

I just saw your message.

Have fun at the party, guys.


Sunniva:

Wait! Wait! Wait.

Umm!! I think I've seen this artifact before.

Can't remember it now.


Alex:

I think the same.

And I know where we saw it.


Sunniva:

Where?

Tell us.


Mara:

I have been searching for it.

It's been two hours.

But I couldn't find anything on Google.


Alex:

Remember that case where someone broke into the old mansion on Elm Street in the town of Willowbrook and stole a priceless artifact?

They never caught the thief, and people say it's haunted now.


Sunniva:

Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!

I remember it now.

It's the Obsidian Eye Compass.

So what do you think about its disappearance?


Alex:

I don't know, but it must be amazing.

A beautiful and magical artifact, and that's why someone tried to steal it.


Sunniva:

No! No!

I think it was destroyed in a fire or something.


Alex:

Destroyed in a fire?

Maybe, I don't know its history.

But if you want, I could ask my dad to help find it.

He is an experienced archaeologist.


Sunniva:

Oh yes, please!!!!

That would help.


Mara:

Wait, guys, I think I found something about this artifact on Google.


Sunniva:

What did you find?


Alex:

Yeah, what's that @Mara?


Mara:

In the depths of a forgotten civilization, there existed a powerful artifact known as the Obsidian Eye Compass.

Legend had it that this compass could reveal hidden truths and guide its possessor to unimaginable treasures.

For centuries, it was guarded by the keepers of the ancient temple until it mysteriously vanished without a trace.

I just googled it now.


Sunniva:

That's strange.

Then what happened to the artifact?

And to those who guarded it?


Alex:

No one knows about that civilization.

Or those people.


Mara:

Well, it's kind of weird actually.

The most recent theory is that it may have been stolen in 1769.

By a wealthy French diplomat named Pierre de Boulon.

When Boulon left his country after being charged with corruption and went looking for treasure.

He came across the ruins of a village but found nothing.

He died after returning home from Italy in 1773. But his family didn't believe him when he said he found the Obsidian Eye Compass.

Even though many tried to find it, they were only able to locate some fragments of a larger orb. There seems to be no trace of the lost object other than that.


Sunniva:

I believe it is hidden somewhere in the country of Amnesia.


Alex:

Really?

How can you be so sure about it?


Sunniva:

I'm not sure about it @Alex!

But I heard that it fell from a great height into the sea, and it landed upon the shores of Amnesia.


Mara:

Later in 2005, a mayor of Willowbrook town was found dead in his mansion's ground ballroom.

His body was arranged in a macabre display, surrounded by cryptic symbols drawn in blood.

Rumors swirled, suspicions mounted, and accusations flew like shadows in the moonlight.

And it became the talk of the town and people say it's something like ancient curses and long-forgotten vendettas.

Even after exhaustive investigations, the case remained unsolved and shrouded in a veil of mystery that lingered over Willowbrook for years to come.

And to this day, the mansion stands as a silent sentinel, guarding its secrets amidst the whispering pines.


Sunniva:

Whoa!! It's so creepy!

I'm getting goosebumps!

Is it possible that someone killed the mayor?


Alex:

Nah, I don't think so.

There were no witnesses.


Sunniva:

Still, we should watch our backs!


Mara:

That is not the end of the story.

Many years later in 2017, in a bustling metropolis, two archaeologists; Dr. Evelyn Monroe and tech mogul Jackson Pierce unearthed a peculiar map while exploring an old library. Little did they know, this map held the key to the whereabouts of the elusive Obsidian Eye Compass.

Yet they disappeared mysteriously.

Dr. Monroe vanished from her office, leaving behind scattered artifacts and a cryptic note hinting at a hidden tomb of that ancient civilization.

While Mr. Pierce vanished from his penthouse leaving a single encrypted message on his computer screen, hinting at corporate espionage gone awry.

And somehow, some way, it has returned in 2024.


Sunniva:

This artifact looks like a rabbit hole of twists and mysteries.

Are we able to do it?

Now I'm a little scared, guys :(


Alex:

We have no other choice @Sunnive.

We have to do it, no matter what.

Since Dr. Hawthorne ordered us.


Mara:

Don't panic @Sunnive.

We will work it out together.

And figure out the solution.


Sunniva:

Yeah, you're right! Thanks @Mara <3 :*

You're the beeestttt!!


Alex:

I have a great idea if you guys say then I can share it.


Sunnive:

Don't ask for it @Alex.

Just share it NOW!!


Mara:

Yeah, @Alex, go ahead.


Alex:

So listen, guys!!

Since this artifact is mysterious, many people died or disappeared without a trace.

Why don't we give a new name to this object?

With that, we won't be able to catch anyone's eye.


Sunnive:

Sounds good @Alex.

It would help us...


Mara:

So what do you suggest @Alex?

What can be the code name?


Alex:

Ummm!! How about the 'Project Shadow Veil'?

It evokes a sense of mystery and privacy.


Sunniva:

Sounds good.

I like it!!


Alex:

I will explore ancient texts and historical records.

@Sunniva, you try to investigate locals. Sometimes, truth hides in the tales of old.

And @Mara, you are good with online handles, try to search for any digital traces.


Mara:

Sounds like a plan.

But remember, we need to be cautious.


Sunniva:

Sure @Mara, now I'm relieved.

We'll need to keep a low profile.


Alex:

Of course.

@Sunniva now hurry up and get ready for the party.


Sunniva:

Yessiree! We will! ^^~!

See ya soon :)

I'm coming to the party!


Alex:

Gonna miss you @Mara :(


Sunniva:

Same here @Mara :(

Rest well for this PROJECT ^_^


**[TWO WEEKS LATER]**


Sunniva:

Hey, guys, did you get the news?


Alex:

What news?


Mara:

What happened @Sunniva?


Sunniva:

Dr. Hawthorne is dead!!!!!!


Alex:

Wait, what?


Mara:

When did this happen?


Sunniva:

Last night!!

It's everywhere on the news now :(

It's confirmed.

Wait, let me share the link.


Alex:

It's shocking!

Two days ago we met him and discussed our progress.


Mara:

How can this happen? :(

How can he just die? And why???


Sunniva:

I don't know.

It just does.

He just died suddenly...

And all his files and personal data got deleted!!

Like, he disappeared off the face of the earth!


Mara:

Who is gonna lead us now??


Sunniva:

Don't know @Mara :((


Alex:

This is huge news.

We need to act fast.


Mara:

Yes, we do.

We need to figure out how it happened so quickly before it affects us even more.


Sunniva:

I'm scared to death now.....

It looks like something bad is gonna happen.


Alex:

Don't panic @Sunniva.

We are here with you!!


Mara:

And nobody knows we are working on this.

So relax and try to act normal.

Go take a shower.

You must feel exhausted after everything that's happened today.


Sunniva:

Sure and thanks, guys <3

But I have other news to share.


Alex:

Spill the beans!!


Mara:

What's the tea?


Sunniva:

After investigating the locals, I found out about the Shadow Veil...

They said they saw it in the same old mansion where the mayor died.


Mara:

But the mansion has been abandoned ever since.

What about it?


Alex:

We will see that @Mara.

Maybe the investigator didn't do his job properly.

Who knows.

What else, @Sunniva?


Sunniva:

You are right @Alex, the investigator didn't do his job properly.

The mansion is built on that old hidden tomb that Dr. Monroe mentioned in her research.


Alex:

Really?

Bravo @Sunniva you did a damn good job.


Mara:

Seriously @Sunniva you did it!!

A hug from me ;*


Sunniva:

Listen more, guys, that artifact had a long history and a dark past.

It has been used by a powerful sorcerer centuries ago, causing death and destruction wherever it went.

Whoever touches it, experiences strange and terrifying visions.

They can see how that sorcerer uses the compass to unleash chaos and devastation which leads to their death.


Alex:

But why did he make that deadly compass?

Which killed so many people?


Sunniva:

Because he placed the curse on it to protect his secrets.

And wanted to unlock his family's dark magic.


Mara:

So it doesn't lead to any place or treasure hunt?


Sunniva:

Yes!! And I think that's why this compass leads Mr. Boulon to the ruined village and he finds nothing.


Alex:

HUH!!! Exactly otherwise anyone who found it could get rich and stable.


Mara:

Well, at least it gives us more information about Dr. Monroe and her research.

I think we need to destroy this compass rather than wait for another death to happen.


Sunniva:

Agreed but still, we are going to find out more about that artifact.

Let's go to the mansion and take a peek inside.


Alex:

All hands on deck!!!

Come on, guys, let’s go.


Mara:

Wait!! Wait!! Wait!!

@Sunniva you are not going anywhere.


Sunniva:

But why @Mara?

I did the whole damn search.

Why can't I tag along? :(


Alex:

Exactly @Mara she did a great job, and she has a right to go.

You can't stop her like this.

And she deserves to know the truth.

Please...

Let her go!!


Mara:

I'm stopping her because I care for her.

She is already scared to death, how can she go and see everything?

We are going with a bunch of tools and gadgets with us, which means we can't hide properly and if someone sees us they will surely come to suspicious conclusions

Besides, we can't handle the situation and scare Sunniva at the same time.


Alex:

Yeah!! You are right @Mara, I agree with you.

We should go alone.


Sunniva:

Well, guys, if you are saying that then I'll stay at home.

But promise me you will update me as soon as you finish this job.


Alex:

We will!! Don't you worry!!

We always will tell you everything that goes down.

Or even send you the pictures.


Mara:

We won't leave you out!! :)


Sunniva:

Okay...

Goodbye, everyone.

I love you both! Stay safe.


**[NEXT DAY!!]**


Alex:

I burned that hidden tomb @Sunniva :(

Now there is nothing left but ashes in the center.


Sunniva:

Wait what?

No!! No!! No!! @Alex not like this....

Tell me the whole story.

And where is this @Mara?

I want to hear from both of you ;)


Alex:

:(((((((

:(((((((

SUNNIIIIIVAAAAA :((((


Sunniva:

What happened @Alex why are you crying?

Can you ease my curiosity?


Alex:

Mara is dead, Sunniva.

She is not with us now :(((


Sunniva:

What? When.....I mean how :0

Care to explain, Alex!!


Alex:

Yesterday around 11 pm we entered the mansion.

At first, we were excited when we reached inside and we decided to check out the whole mansion before looking for the artifact.

Then we entered the hidden tomb and started looking for clues about the ruins and artifacts.

After that, everything went wrong.

I was trying to look up some info on an ancient book called 'The Secret about Obsidian Eye Compasses' when I heard a noise.

Something scurried across the room, so I grabbed the flashlight and looked up.

The light blinded me, so I dropped the flashlight.

The next thing I knew I felt like somebody grabbed me and dragged me away.

After that, I was carried and I felt a cold stone beneath me and darkness surrounding me.

I wanted to see who it was, and it was Mara!!! :(((((

She attacked me and dragged me inside that hidden tomb.

She touched that artifact and became possessed. Her body began to convulse as if she was controlled by an unseen entity.

I tried to talk to her but she suddenly started speaking in a language which I can't understand. :((((


Sunniva:

Then what happened? :((((


Alex:

Then she started throwing mud into the pit, wanting to bury me alive:((((

I don't know what happened next, but I saw her body suddenly blown into pieces.

She died!!! :(((

After everything started falling, I burned that artifact along with that tomb.


Sunniva:

Did Mara touch the compass?


Alex:

I don't know anything about what happened before.

I just saw Mara go wild.

We solved the artifact mystery but we lost our friend forever:((((


Sunniva:

I think she knew it from the start, that's why she stopped me and saved you.

She knew she couldn't handle both of us.

She sacrificed herself for us.


Alex:

Let's not forget her sacrifice!! :((((


Sunniva:

Never!! :((

We can never forget her :(((

How did you set the fire in the tomb?

I mean what about the smoke and smell?



Alex:


I didn't manage to set a fire; it kind of caught my sleeve on fire and I used the lighter to put it out.


That wasn't intentional though :(


But at least it worked:)))))



Sunniva:


Great! So we have no idea who did this to the house.



Alex:


No idea :/ but we might be able to narrow down the suspects.



Sunniva:


Really? Which ones?



Alex:


Someone named "Korra".


And I've discovered something: she seems to have been involved in the incident with Dr. Monroe.


She was also the one who told me about the map.



Sunniva:


Oh really? Who is she? How does she know Dr. Monroe?


Why was she after them? Who are all of those people?


And most importantly: who is the mysterious sorcerer?



Alex:


No one knows anything about her. But let's forget about the artifact. It's gone now, with Mara:((((


Just try to act normal if you want to live://



Sunniva:


Don't worry, I will!! :/




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Shaun M Waller Shaun M Waller
I really enjoyed reading this story, nicely written and structured, very easy to read and was interesting all the way through and kept me hooked.
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Justin Corpse Justin Corpse
Interesting piece of work.
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Nice story
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Nice work!!
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