Lily, Jess, Quinn, Jason, Kody and Robin are childhood bestfriends since they were in 4th grade, now they are currently in 11th grade. They recently had a new friend called Andrea and she's a brat. They planned to go for a trip in forest near their school.
"Are you guys ready?" asks Lily.
The group nodded. "Can we go now?" Andrea asks while frowning.
"What a brat" thinks Robin.
"You'll be wrinkly if you keep frowning Andrea" says Jess.
They went to the location by car as planned on 15th September at noon. After hours of driving they got there at afternoon. They went in the forest further and further until they stumbled upon a warning sign saying "Do Not Go Any Further" and "Danger, Keep Out" with a bunch of strings around them.
"Is this some kind of a joke?" Jason scoffs
"I don't t-think s-so, Jason" Quinn stutters, "I-it says that w-we can't g-go any f-further"
"Don't be scardy cat Quinn, maybe its just a prank, someone wants to prank on us" says Jess.
The group went further and further to the forest and stopped at a familiar looking tree.
"Isn't this the same tree that I just marked?" Lily says.
"When did you marked the tree? And where did you even get a knife so sharp?" Jess asks.
"L-lets just rest h-here guys, I-I'm tired of t-this long walk" Quinn says.
They group agreed. They went to set up the tents for the night and went to collect firewoods to cook food. After eating and talking they went to bed.
Vielen Dank für das Lesen!
A good start, even though ouch! Andrea is a brat (my real name is Andrea ;-) ) Otherwise, a fine start into a hopefully creepy story. The story doesn't take long to start with action and the warning that something could be wrong comes relatively early, augmenting the suspense. I'm reading on!
Okay...so, what was brilliant is that the friends hear Quinn screaming and run after her, but they're unfortunately too late. And obviously in shock...but why don't they call the police or call for help!? But it was touching to read about the boyfriend burying his girlfriend. And the kids stay...
Why Jason has been picked out isn't that clear to me yet - I would have suspected Robin, if I were honest...But this chapter is a collage of emotions - sadness, regret, suspicion - a lovely cocktail for paranoia. It's written in a way that keeps the reader guessing and asking questions - intriguing!
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