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Lisa Panek
A book for children teaching them what to eat, and to help their parents use the fruits and vegetables to please everyone!
Kinder Alles öffentlich.
When all of the towns children got together, they all met over their friends house to learn how to handle things as they grew up. Once all of the kids got together, they decided to go outside and help their mom's and dad's work on the garden of fresh fruits and vegetables! All of the children took turns taking care of the growing gardens. Because they all wanted fresh fruits and vegetables to eat.
Vielen Dank für das Lesen!
KRI like this short story but maby if you would make it into a rhyme more children would find it more enjoyable, I love the message behind it but maby also adding in the the last bit(beacause they all wanted fresh fruits and vegetables to eat) maby add on how it makes them feel to do this good deed!
KRHonestly this was a little bit random don't get me wrong I love the helpful messages behind your short stories but I can't help but recognise that some parts don't really make sense or follow up with the sentence or word befor and in my opinion it ended quite randomly maby work on that😊
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